More Than Words (Double Drabble #39)
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Title: More Than Words (Double Drabble #39)
Characters: Booth, Brennan
Series: All That Lies Between Us
Written for: drabble123
Prompt Table: Romance
Prompt: #18 (Rare)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 200
Timeline: After Santa in the Slush.
Spoilers: Through Season 1.
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.
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Honestly, she often says the wrong thing, her words awkward and halting. But it isn't the words or how she speaks them; it's her eyes. They gut him with their strange combination of experience and innocence--leave him spread open--with secrets spilling out.
Pushing his sunglasses up on his nose, he turns his head and finds her watching him. Wind filters through the half-open windows, snapping at her hair.
Unlike most people, Brennan doesn't talk unless she has something to say, doesn't seem to need to fill silence. But silence can be dangerous sometimes--like now--when he doesn't know how much longer he can dam the words building in his chest. Smiling tightly, he turns on the radio.
Author's Note: It's official: Booth and Brennan have eaten my brain.
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Date: 2008-02-18 11:01 pm (UTC)You're just admitting that now? XD
Lovely as always.
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Date: 2008-02-18 11:09 pm (UTC)*snickers* Good point.
Lovely as always.
Thanks. :)
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Date: 2008-02-18 11:09 pm (UTC)I like this line - it really captures Brennan.
And I like how her silence can unnerve him.
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Date: 2008-02-20 11:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-18 11:10 pm (UTC)Booth being stubborn!
Nice to have on a Monday evening to prepare us for the week ahead :)
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Date: 2008-02-20 11:50 pm (UTC)Thanks, Emily!
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Date: 2008-02-18 11:23 pm (UTC)Oh, I like that. It's one of the many reasons I think they make such a good team.
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Date: 2008-02-18 11:29 pm (UTC)Lovely post :) I love their car riding scenes :)
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Date: 2008-02-20 11:55 pm (UTC)Thank you. They do cars and restaurants really well. Hm... I think that sounded more perverted than I intended.
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Date: 2008-02-21 08:31 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-18 11:37 pm (UTC)Yes.
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Date: 2008-02-19 07:11 am (UTC)2. Oh yeah: every time he pushes those sunglasses up higher, it's for a reason. He punctuates his speech with them. And her? He's so open to her that I wonder she doesn't get it yet - and when she does, when she does.... Wow....
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Date: 2008-02-25 06:41 pm (UTC)Yes! *sighs and waits for the day*
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Date: 2008-02-19 01:32 pm (UTC)But reading your drabbles is always a pleasure - I enjoy them (and your writing) so much!
It's official: Booth and Brennan have eaten my brain.
You and me both. lol
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Date: 2008-02-25 06:44 pm (UTC)Thank you, Melissa. It's always a pleasure writing about Booth and Brennan, so I am thrilled you're reading and enjoying my stories.
You and me both. lol
*g* I had a feeling I might not be the only one. ;)
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Date: 2008-02-19 07:01 pm (UTC)Greeeat one, once again!! :D
And.. it's official only now? :P Your brain was eaten by them a long time ago.. you just officialized xD now because you noticed... only now! xD
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Date: 2008-02-25 06:46 pm (UTC)Your brain was eaten by them a long time ago.
:D That's true.
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Date: 2008-02-19 10:30 pm (UTC)Well I'm enjoying this, anyway! :D
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Date: 2008-02-20 03:09 am (UTC)This reminds me of the final scene in The Girl With The Curl- when Booth is leaning right into her face and they've both admitted the other is "structured well". Just that loaded, heavy silence where they both want to say more but don't quite know how or if the time is right.
Lovely drabble.
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Date: 2008-02-25 06:49 pm (UTC)The scene you mentioned is wonderful. As you said, the silence is loaded with all the things they want to say but aren't ready or able to just yet.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment; I'm thrilled you liked this.
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