Beloved One (Double Drabble #33)
Feb. 13th, 2008 07:49 pmTitle: Beloved One (Double Drabble #33) [I owe the title to Ben Harper. If anyone wants the song, let me know; I'll upload it.]
Characters: Booth, Brennan
Series: All That Lies Between Us
Spoilers: None
Timeline: Future
Prompt Table: Romance
Written for:
drabble123
Prompt: #2 (Hope)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 200
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.
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Characters: Booth, Brennan
Series: All That Lies Between Us
Spoilers: None
Timeline: Future
Prompt Table: Romance
Written for:
Prompt: #2 (Hope)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 200
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.
Click here for fic index.
Click here to read the other drabbles in this series.
A warm breeze drifts across the park, bumping cotton candy clouds and whispering through the green canopy of leaves above them. Booth exhales and looks down. Brennan's head rests in his lap like it belongs there. He isn't used to seeing her like this--hands quiet and still on her stomach instead of cradling bone or wielding instruments he can't name--but the sight fills his chest with something he won't label out of fear that it'll be taken away.
Generations die and are born in between each rise and fall of her chest.
Though her eyes are closed, he knows she's awake because a hint of a smile touches the corners of her mouth. This pulls an answering smile from him, and he wonders what colors flicker behind her eyelids.
He plucks a single blade of grass. Holding his breath, he brushes it across her cheek and watches her nose twitch in reaction. Without opening her eyes, she captures his hand and cups it over her eyes, her skin smooth and sun-warmed under his palm.
"What are you doing?"
"Hiding from the world."
"You do that a lot?"
She lifts his hand and opens her eyes. "Only when I'm with you."
Author's Note: Maybe someone somewhere is wondering why I've done two of these in one day. Well, I'm itching to write something that's longer than 200 words, but I feel like the remaining
drabble123 prompts are hanging over my head, so I can't. Yes, I'm aware that doesn't make any sense. *g* Anyway, I'm going to try (operative word being try) to write at least two of these double drabbles per day until I've finished off all the prompts in my table. I need to get these out of my head so I can move on. I swear I'm not trying to spam my f-list, but if you feel spammed, close your eyes and think of England. Oops, sorry, I mean, close your eyes or defriend me. I promise I won't be offended. :)
Oh, and I wrote this because it's cold and nasty here, and after the drugs finally kicked in and killed my headache, I started daydreaming about better weather.
Generations die and are born in between each rise and fall of her chest.
Though her eyes are closed, he knows she's awake because a hint of a smile touches the corners of her mouth. This pulls an answering smile from him, and he wonders what colors flicker behind her eyelids.
He plucks a single blade of grass. Holding his breath, he brushes it across her cheek and watches her nose twitch in reaction. Without opening her eyes, she captures his hand and cups it over her eyes, her skin smooth and sun-warmed under his palm.
"What are you doing?"
"Hiding from the world."
"You do that a lot?"
She lifts his hand and opens her eyes. "Only when I'm with you."
Author's Note: Maybe someone somewhere is wondering why I've done two of these in one day. Well, I'm itching to write something that's longer than 200 words, but I feel like the remaining
Oh, and I wrote this because it's cold and nasty here, and after the drugs finally kicked in and killed my headache, I started daydreaming about better weather.
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Date: 2008-02-14 01:35 am (UTC)And I totally get the headache bit. I used to suffer from migraines (and I wonder how I used to make it to work, and through work, with headaches that lasted for weeks). I don't really get them anymore, but let's pet the pretty drugs, shall we? We loves them, our precious...
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Date: 2008-03-03 05:17 pm (UTC)ha ha Exactly, though I'm not nearly as orderly when it comes to dishes. *g*
Glad you don't get migraines anymore. The longest I've had a headache is about a day or two, and man, that bites. I can't even imagine having headaches that last for weeks. *shudders*
As always, thank you for your lovely comments. *hugs you*
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Date: 2008-02-14 01:40 am (UTC)Hope you feel better. I am ready for warm weather also :P
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Date: 2008-02-21 08:19 pm (UTC)I am so ready for sun and warmth and flowers and...
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Date: 2008-02-14 02:28 am (UTC)Oh, gods, that is gorgeous.
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Date: 2008-02-14 04:57 am (UTC)It's not spam, it's fun. And, as I currently have my feet placed directly against my space heater, I feel ya on the downer weather.
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Date: 2008-03-03 05:18 pm (UTC)Thanks for commenting. :)
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Date: 2008-02-14 06:22 am (UTC)"Hiding from the world."
"You do that a lot?"
She lifts his hand and opens her eyes. "Only when I'm with you."
Awww...and don't we all wish we had a love like that?
You were seriously feeling doubts about your writing ability? Kidding, right? Trust me, it's as good as ever, adn not going anywhere. Must be the headache talking!
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Date: 2008-03-03 05:20 pm (UTC)*smiles* Indeed.
And thank you for your reassurances; I do have doubts about my writing. I think it's a normal part of the creative process, but it can be detrimental sometimes. :\
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Date: 2008-02-14 07:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-03 05:22 pm (UTC)I can understand why you wanted to be in Brennan's shoes during this moment. *g* Booth's a hell of a (fictional) man. ;) And yes, he loves her.
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Date: 2008-02-14 08:48 am (UTC)And you know what? Spam me more xD I love this kind of spam :D
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Date: 2008-02-21 08:20 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-14 12:39 pm (UTC)Lovely scene.
Generations die and are born in between each rise and fall of her chest.
Phrases like this one can do the World a bit better.
"What are you doing?"
"Hiding from the world."
"You do that a lot?"
She lifts his hand and opens her eyes. "Only when I'm with you."
It’s so beautiful that I could cry.
This is so perfect that I can’t understand that somebody doesn’t like it.
Two double drabbles per day!!! *happy dance*
I hope that you feel better. *hugs*
Besos
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Date: 2008-03-03 05:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-14 02:15 pm (UTC)i look forward for more stuff :D
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Date: 2008-03-03 05:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-14 03:25 pm (UTC)I am definitely not thinking of England when I am reading your drabbles ROFLOL
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Date: 2008-03-03 05:24 pm (UTC)I am definitely not thinking of England when I am reading your drabbles ROFLOL
*grins and winks at you*
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Date: 2008-02-14 04:08 pm (UTC)I loved this simple piece... It's so true. The hiding from the world part...where they put down their scientific tools and guns and badges and just be.
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Date: 2008-03-03 05:25 pm (UTC)Life feels pretty simple during the moments when you can "just be," as you put it. :)
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Date: 2008-02-14 05:18 pm (UTC)I loved the short dialouge. :)
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Date: 2008-02-14 07:13 pm (UTC)Made me smile and filled my heart with the sweetness of it. You really made my Valentine's Day better!
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