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Title: Some Days You Wake Up In the Army
Character:
Booth
Rating:
PG
Timeline/Spoilers:
Set at some undetermined point in the show.  I'd say this is spoilery through 1x21: The Soldier on the Grave.
Word Count: 100
A/N:
If you're looking for happy, I'd suggest you skip this one.

[livejournal.com profile] witchofthedogs  left me this prompt several months ago: "In sunshine and in rain, I will stand on the hill and rejoice."
Summary: For Booth, some days are better than others.
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Some Days You Wake Up In the Army

Sometimes Booth still wakes spitting sand, a hollow ache in his stomach and a phantom stiffness in his limbs.

Sometimes Parker’s nightmare-induced cries merge with those of another boy, one who spent his seventh birthday covered in his dying father’s blood.

Sometimes the old cadences echo in his ears, and he asks himself where, exactly, Rangers lead the way to.

Sometimes he has to spend ten minutes staring at his reflection in the bathroom mirror before he can force his frozen lips into a smile that has a chance of fooling the world.

Sometimes he wonders if he’s fooling anyone.


A/N: Thanks for reading.

Date: 2008-10-15 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lizook12.livejournal.com
I'm always looking for teh happy, but you write them so well I couldn't bring myself to skip. Glad I didn't; wonderful job.

Date: 2008-10-15 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rollsofrice.livejournal.com
Excellent. You write angsty Booth best; you make it an integral part of his character more than the show does (at least this season).

Date: 2008-10-15 05:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tidbit2008.livejournal.com
Very nicely written, m'dear. Sad, but well written.

Date: 2008-10-15 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tempertemper77.livejournal.com
Oh this is haunting - you know I love this side to Booth, that we rarely get to see anymore. I adore the imagery at the start with the sand.

This makes me think about something I read DB say in a recent interview, about how he'd like to see how Booth copes with getting up in the morning and facing the world, with this front he puts on.

*loves you*

Date: 2008-10-15 09:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/alderaan_/
I want to see more of this Booth, I want to see his anguish and his nightmares. I love goofy!Booth but angst!Booth is such fascinating man.

Wonderful job :D

Besos

Date: 2008-10-15 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bella240.livejournal.com
I agree... this side of Booth is very interesting and real. You write it well.

Date: 2008-10-15 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scandinave.livejournal.com
Beautiful! Angsty, haunting, sad.
I love the mix of reality and memory; the way you show how his dreams bleed into his waking hours.
And all in so few words. The power you pack into a drabble never ceases to amaze.

Date: 2008-10-15 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] landrews.livejournal.com
Evocative imagery. I <3 this Booth version. I wish this were waaaayyyy longer!!!

Date: 2008-10-15 05:40 pm (UTC)
tabaqui: (Default)
From: [personal profile] tabaqui
Sometimes Booth still wakes spitting sand...

Oh, love it. Really gorgeous.

Date: 2008-10-15 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buffyangellvr23.livejournal.com
wow awesome *hugs him*

Date: 2008-10-16 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pali167.livejournal.com
Oh, Booth. *gives him a big hug*

Date: 2008-10-16 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ws-scribe.livejournal.com
Wow! That was amazing. I really wish the show would go more into Booth's background instead of making him seem...stupid(bot not entirely so)...

-"Sometimes the old cadences echo in his ears..."

When I went to AF boot camp, we used to sing jodies when marching and the last day we all woke up and they were engrained into our heads...we were singing them on the way to chow even when training was over and we were "regular civilians" again.


This was great.

Date: 2008-10-16 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mustangalley.livejournal.com
I always appreciate dark Booth, and you always deliver!

Sometimes the old cadences echo in his ears, and he asks himself where, exactly, Rangers lead the way to. This one is my favourite -- Booth doesn't always know where he's going but he knows he's got to go somewhere.

Thank you for this.

Date: 2008-10-17 03:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dabhug.livejournal.com
Oh, yes. I agree!

Date: 2008-10-16 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostakasha.livejournal.com
Ah, Booth...the Booth I recognize and cherish and who is so exquisite when he breaks. Just...more. More, more, maore.

Date: 2008-10-16 06:37 pm (UTC)
ext_2333: "That's right,  people, I am a constant surprise." (Default)
From: [identity profile] makd.livejournal.com
Ah, Seeley...you don't fool us

Date: 2008-10-17 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] redeem147.livejournal.com
Very, very good. We haven't seen this side of Booth for a long time on the show, but it's there, and I appreciate it.

Date: 2008-10-17 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lone-poppy.livejournal.com
great stories thank you!

Date: 2008-10-17 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myangelmia.livejournal.com
Awesome awesome awesome.

I hope we get to *this* Booth season four.

You painted a great picture with so few words. Great work!

Date: 2008-10-17 04:49 pm (UTC)
jerusha: (Default)
From: [personal profile] jerusha
So melancholy, but I think it really fit those moments we saw Booth at his most vulnerable, particularly in S1.

Date: 2008-10-17 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sb158.livejournal.com
Poor Booth. That Catholic guilt is a terrible burden. He might fool most people, but I bet there's one he ain't fooling...

Date: 2008-10-17 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] happy-overdose.livejournal.com
*Cannot speak due to heart pains*
*Tries*
*Still can't speak*

Date: 2008-10-18 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limone1.livejournal.com
I don't know how you do it - compressing the life and soul of someone into five sentences, but you just did. I love the structure of this one.

PS. Do you own the copyright to the A/N of this or can I cut and paste those words at the top of everything I post ;)

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