Okay, now I'm capable of coherent feedback. And ... wow. I normally like to go through and pick out a favorite line or passage, and you've made that nearly impossible here. (Because it's all so good, in case that wasn't clear. :)
I keep going back to the paragraph where Brennan's watching Booth, right after she's told him. Her observations there - your observations there - are just beautifully written.
You did a lot with this chapter, and I think you know I'll be eagerly waiting to see what comes next.
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Date: 2007-11-12 01:44 pm (UTC)I keep going back to the paragraph where Brennan's watching Booth, right after she's told him. Her observations there - your observations there - are just beautifully written.
You did a lot with this chapter, and I think you know I'll be eagerly waiting to see what comes next.