Date: 2008-12-04 02:24 am (UTC)
wow.

wonderful.

making sure to close the front door quietly instead of letting it slam shut like Jared would. Love that juxtaposition.

This: Then up rises Parker's face, until the three images blur and merge into one another.

Until all he can see is little boys covered in blood
gave me chills.

And then, you tie it altogether with that last paragraph... Really, I feel like I overuse the word with you, but it's perfect.
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