Thank you for reading and commenting. I have mixed feelings about the use of present tense. It can work beautifully sometimes, and other times I think it might be difficult to read after a while. Might just irritate readers in a longer piece of writing. But this definitely wasn't long, and I had fun trying something a little different. It's good to stretch. Maybe I should try writing a longer story in present tense and see how it reads.
Before I somehow, um, stopped writing anything
I hope you get back to writing at some point, if that's what you want. :)
Thanks for stopping by to read this; I love the little discussions that can go on in comments.
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Date: 2007-12-04 03:12 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading and commenting. I have mixed feelings about the use of present tense. It can work beautifully sometimes, and other times I think it might be difficult to read after a while. Might just irritate readers in a longer piece of writing. But this definitely wasn't long, and I had fun trying something a little different. It's good to stretch. Maybe I should try writing a longer story in present tense and see how it reads.
Before I somehow, um, stopped writing anything
I hope you get back to writing at some point, if that's what you want. :)
Thanks for stopping by to read this; I love the little discussions that can go on in comments.