very very nice. i adore this style (i write all of my fics in present tense) and you've written booth really well. the lines Looking would mean seeing and She stares at him, he stares at her—seeing at last are fabulous. most of the booth/brennan fic that i've come across lately has been unrealistic and ooc, but you've really struck a good chord with this.
thunderclouds brewing in her eyes, and he knows he put them there. so perfectly brennan.
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Date: 2007-12-02 07:42 pm (UTC)thunderclouds brewing in her eyes, and he knows he put them there.
so perfectly brennan.