This is great. I love the characterization, and the fact that I'm completely drawn in as a reader and left needing more. I usually don't read anything longer than a one-shot, but this is pure genius and so well-written.
Keep the chapters coming! I can't wait to read more and see how this is going to turn out.
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Date: 2007-10-21 03:03 am (UTC)Keep the chapters coming! I can't wait to read more and see how this is going to turn out.