ext_50376 ([identity profile] rollsofrice.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] only_more_love 2008-05-09 03:27 am (UTC)

This batch is wonderful--Sentence 33 is particularly stirring in its inevitability, and I love the concept of 'giving freely of our hearts and minds instead of saving them for the right moment'.

I'm actually doing the [livejournal.com profile] 1sentence challenge too, for a different table, and often writing down what comes to your mind first-- though not necessarily best-- usually works for me.

Thank you for sharing. (The poem is beautiful.)

They fall and fall, and still the sky is sky.
Two more have gone, but heaven is heaven still.


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