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Title: Negotiation (Double Drabble #35)
Characters:  Booth, Brennan
Series:  All That Lies Between Us
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None
Timeline:  Future
Prompt Table:  Romance
Written for:  [profile] drabble123
Prompt: #19 (Surprise)
Word Count: 200
Disclaimer:  Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me.  This story is purely meant to entertain.  No copyright infringement is intended.

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Please note that this is a companion to Stalemate (Chapter 17).  This won't make much sense if you don't read that first.

As Booth gets ready for bed, he brushes his teeth and tries not to see the pieces of her that are scattered around his place--like the mousse sitting next to his gel. 

Though the sheets are icy when he climbs into bed, he forces his eyes closed.  He sleeps for only a few minutes at a time, and that feels worse than not sleeping at all.

When a shadow melts out of the blackness, he doesn't reach for his gun.  Three breaths later, the bed dips.  He remains still; it's her move. 

The silence nearly breaks under the weight of their words.

"I don't want to hurt you--" she finally says.

"Too late."

"--But I can't give you up either."

The words fill him with hollow satisfaction.  Why should he be the only one to want what he can't have?

"What do you want, Bones?" he asks, his voice unrecognizable.

"You."  Her answer surprises him.

"What if you can't have that?"

"Is that the case?"

Though not doing so still might cost him everything, he isn't ready to call her bluff yet.  "No."

She exhales.  "I'm...sorry."

Nothing's resolved, but he believes her.  "I know. Come here."  He opens his arms.

Author's Note: Does this seem like a copout, or can you feel the ambiguity?

Date: 2008-02-15 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] highvoltage11.livejournal.com
There's always been the debate (for instance) about Booth compromising his beliefs and 'dreams'to be with her. Would he father her child if that meant although they were committed they didn't marry? Would it be enough for him if they didn't have a marriage or children and the picket fence scenario? I always have believed that it wouldn't be a compromise for him if he got her. She would be enough.

So, I believe your scenario. He wants more, but in the end he just wants her.

Date: 2008-02-15 06:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simplyn2deep.livejournal.com
I totally agree with [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com].

I think a lot of people are quick to put their favorite ships together and have them live this happy life together, but that isn't always how life is.

As is the case with Booth and Brennan. He wants more, be that with Brennan or someone else, but he'd settle for having part of his dream, and that's Brennan.

Date: 2008-02-15 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/alderaan_/
Beautiful reconciliation.
I think that Booth could give up part of his dreams by Brennan. Because she is his main dream, isn't she?

Besos

Date: 2008-02-15 12:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] jadeakira.livejournal.com
I'll second what [livejournal.com profile] highvoltage11 and [livejournal.com profile] simplyndeep have said.

I've never liked the idea of them having a perfect relationship or a smooth time getting to that point. I'd like to think that there would be a bit of give and take on either side, but mostly I think it's Booth would would have to make the personal sacrifices to have Brennan, not the other way round. I don't think she would ever be able to give in fully to the conventional life of husband and wife, kids, the dog and the pitched fence. But Booth needs her enough to let go of those things.

Date: 2008-02-15 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rollsofrice.livejournal.com
I'm sure this is going to sound awfully shallow compared to the excellent mini-essay comments everyone else has made, but I would prefer(rather paradoxically, because I am inclined towards B/B) not to see Brennan and Booth "get together" on the show, solely because what they have now(in my opinion) is their special relationship and it cannot be sustained in romantic involvement.

Then again, you should ignore that. Ships are a hope for the future, anyway. :-) This is a wonderful companion to Stalemate, though I enjoyed the first one more.

Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2008-02-15 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elena1701.livejournal.com
No, this doesn't seem like a copout - I think with the differences between them, this kind of situation is inevitable, though I prefer to think that it's not that Brennan doesn't love him, it's that she can't admit it to herself or him (because I'm a bit of a hopeless romantic).

Compromise is a part of any relationship, whether it's about minor or major things, and that's what this story suggests to me.

Date: 2008-02-15 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dabhug.livejournal.com
Been there, done that, got the t-shirt, wore it out and gave it away to Goodwill. So yeah, completely believable.

Date: 2008-02-15 08:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistletoe54.livejournal.com
I think these two exist in ambiguity so there is no cop out: it's one of their moments of complicity. I can't see the relationship being any more than moments. That's probably your fault; they come together in a case or an ending, but there can be no settling into routine. That would reduce them somehow into ordinary people, which neither of them is. Hope that's not to thinky for a Friday but your question prompted it. Stalemate did feel more satisfying, though I'm pleased she came back. Booth would settle for that.

Date: 2008-02-15 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buffyangellvr23.livejournal.com
nice, as always :) I like that you write so much.

Date: 2008-02-15 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangirlgonewild.livejournal.com
Booth and Brennan have such a rocky future ahead. The balance between partners and friends is so tenuous...and romance changes that dynamic. And Booth and Brennan are so different as individuals. Blending those two lives together would be very difficult.

Date: 2008-02-16 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justice79.livejournal.com
This one is so chilling. I would pay good money to see Emily and David do this scene.

Date: 2008-02-16 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarabones.livejournal.com
Totally agree with highvoltage.
Completely true ;)

And the reconciliation? It could happen :D

Date: 2008-02-16 09:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] killmotion.livejournal.com
Not a copout, no! Ambiguity roams free like a bunny in a meadow. The tension is so thick between them I couldn't cut it with a knife.

Date: 2008-02-17 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tidbit2008.livejournal.com
I don't think it's necessarily a cop out. When it all comes down to it, we love the people we love whether we're married to them or not. Booth may dream of marriage and a white picket fence and all that jazz, but just because you dream of having a million bucks doesn't mean it's a cop out if you never get it. I think at the end of the day it has to be more important who you're with than what you're doing, that if you love someone and they love you back and yall are together and happy that's got to be more important than having a ring on your left hand. This life will never be perfect, not every dream will be fulfilled, but that doesn't mean it's settling if you're content with your life as it is.

Nice piece, btw. Thought-provoking. I liked it :)

Date: 2008-06-08 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amilyn.livejournal.com
Definitely can feel the ambiguity and tension. Nice.

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