I would offer to Beta, but I think you've gotten more than enough offers by now. :) That being said, this is not my favorite story of yours - not because the characters are wrong or because of any writing errors - just because of the subject matter. It's difficult for me to picture Booth breaking down to that extent, even if it is in front of Brennan. Now, that's not to say that it would never happen or anything like that - it's just difficult for me to picture, is all. I still enjoy the story - it's just not my favorite. :D