I don't need references; I've read your writing. :) And thank you for offering. Don't mind, but I'm going to copy and paste from my reply to another comment:

Surprisingly, a lot of people have responded to my request. I have no idea what I'm going to do yet, but I will certainly keep your offer in mind. I appreciate your willingness to help. At present, I don't have anything written that I want someone to look at. I have a vague idea for a story rolling around in my brain, but I don't know if it makes sense to write it or even if I CAN write it well. And then there are characterization and structure questions. I thought it might help to have a sounding board or boards. Not that I'm arrogant enough to believe my actual writing wouldn't benefit from another pair of eyes. If I take on this story, I know I'll want to have someone else take a look at it before I make an ass of myself.

I'll try to catch you on email and IM. But I also know you're very busy (family, work, your own writing), and I don't want to burden you.

Okay, I will admit to having no time at the moment -- I haven't read this chapter yet, but I'll rectify that as soon as possible.

What?! You mean you have other priorities besides reading fanfiction? Impossible. ;)