I loved part one...and when I went back to reread it I realized I never commented then! So I owe you.
My favorite thing about your writing is the details and how you open up their minds for the reader. There isn't any question about "Why did he do that?" "What is her motive for saying that?"... Although they may not understand each other sometime, you do a wonderful job helping the reader understand by keeping things in character. Even around the dark stuff.
My favorite lines were: "Look at me," he said, and she did. He ceased moving, arms spread wide, and laughed humorlessly. "I'm a mess. An addict. Fifty kills to atone for. You've seen my x-rays. I'm broken, Bones. You know where and you know why."
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My favorite thing about your writing is the details and how you open up their minds for the reader. There isn't any question about "Why did he do that?" "What is her motive for saying that?"... Although they may not understand each other sometime, you do a wonderful job helping the reader understand by keeping things in character. Even around the dark stuff.
My favorite lines were:
"Look at me," he said, and she did. He ceased moving, arms spread wide, and laughed humorlessly. "I'm a mess. An addict. Fifty kills to atone for. You've seen my x-rays. I'm broken, Bones. You know where and you know why."